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Post by tigtiggyman123 on Apr 4, 2011 18:58:22 GMT -5
Name: icekit/icepaw (icecloud) Age (Moons): 4 Gender: She-Cat Clan: DawnClan Rank: Kit Appearance: small pure white she-cat with big bright blue eyes. Personality: she is very shy ,but fast when it comes to running. History: she was born in dawnclan , but has lost her father at an age she couldnt remember. Relationships: icekit-alive mom-whitefrost dad-? bf-none enemy-none love-mousekit
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Post by Gold on Apr 4, 2011 20:16:34 GMT -5
Just a hint: You may want to consider making her Appearance and Personality longer. Don't just briefly describe her, get into her details.
Example: Icecloud is a small, delicate she cat with the identicle color to pale white snow. Her sharp, icy blue eyes emphasize her georgous pelt with a shy emotion always lingering in them. (Something like that but not exactly this.)
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Post by Moo it's Lia on Apr 5, 2011 6:34:01 GMT -5
Same with Gold, just hit "modify" on your original post and you can add or delete things.
I would suggest describing Icekit more and possibly attaching a picture of your cat.
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